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Me without you
March 2, 2010
The sun without the shine.
The stars without the moon.
The wind without the air.
The song without the birds.
The spark without the fire.
Me without you.
© Steve S., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 11 comments.
queentabbiecat99 GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:45 pm
i think its very good you don't need a lot of words. it's just how people feel when they lost a love one they don't use a lot of words ether they are in to much pain
I feel like this needs more. Maybe go in deeper and talk about how you feel without your loved one. Use similes and work into how you feel. I do like simple poems too, but I feel like you left me short. Good job though, and keep writing!!
Make sure you check out my poems too! :-)
Make sure you check out my poems too! :-)
taylor_rae BRONZE said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 5:34 pm
its a good poem but i doesnt have much emotions in it when i read a poem i like to feel what the author is feeling
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 10:40 am
I thin you had a great and meaningfl poem going but I was surprised to see it so short. In my opinon you should have made It a bit longer. Other than that it was wonderful. I can truly relate to it!! :) ~
little-miss-mistakes GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 11:18 pm
i like this, sweet and to the point
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