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His stranger

March 19, 2010
By FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
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FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
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if i were the rain could i ever merge with someones heart like the way rain merges with the sky and earth- BLEAH QUOTE

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No beauty in me, I’m not sure what it is he sees in me.
No love left in my broken heart, yet somehow I am in love.
No hope in me to get me to believe that he won’t leave.
No smile left to give him, but somehow he gives me away.
Once dark; now just a shadow.
Once hopeless; now with faith in us.
Once loveless; now feeling my heart beating for him.
Turned a sad girl into this stranger she doesn’t know.
She no longer knows who she is anymore, but his lover.
His stranger.

© Michelle M., Plainview, NY

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he changed me emotionaly =]
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MKimmi said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 6:53 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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is it inspired by ur own life? wow.

nice, just kinda confusing a little

but 5/5

FateshiddenWriter GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:48 am
FateshiddenWriter GOLD, Williamsburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
if i were the rain could i ever merge with someones heart like the way rain merges with the sky and earth- BLEAH QUOTE

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many ppl seem to veiew this poem andd i love that but id like some comments andd who evere rated 5 thank youu soooo much!!!!=]