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Beautiful Disaster

April 27, 2010
By Basketball4everr GOLD, Smithtown, New York
Basketball4everr GOLD, Smithtown, New York
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The Sky is crying
It’s so sad and blue
Moving so slow like when a rose opens,
I can’t do anything right
I just keep falling,

I’m just a

Beautiful disaster.
I’m on the ground when I see a hand

Reaching for me,
I look at him. He looks at

Staring into those intense brown eyes

And that’s all I see.

Take his hand

Hold it tight

He picks me up,

Stumbling to get my balance
I fall onto his stone hard muscled

& look up &
see his delicate pink lips
I kiss them
they kiss back
“You’re such a beautiful disaster” he whispers in my ear

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 6:16 pm
MustangWriter1813 PLATINUM, Crooks, South Dakota
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This is much better than the frist one I read before! Amazing visual when reading this  5 out of 5