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~Fate~

May 11, 2010
By Hay.467 SILVER, Hide-a-way, Texas
Hay.467 SILVER, Hide-a-way, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"a man is never more truthful than when he acknowledges himself a liar" mark twain


The shadows of the futures hold,
The leaking sieves of time,
Where every minute, as unfolds,
Predicts this destiny of mine,
And as the shadows longer grow,
And the noon bell tolls on,
Like the mournful cattle low,
Death approaches our moanings fond,
Of his guidance to the brightness,
For although dark, so dark the night,
The pale moon shines his ghoulish glow,
Upon the grave heads set below,
Our doorway to eternity,
Carved by the actions of the free.


The author's comments:
This is just an old poem i went back and re-wrote...

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on May. 20 2010 at 2:42 pm
RoseR. PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
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id rather be hated for who i am than be loved for someone im not, ill never be JUST a memory.

wonderful

 


leona1127 GOLD said...
on May. 20 2010 at 11:37 am
leona1127 GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
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"Try not to react on first emotions it's not Zen like" -L. divine

This is beautiful you have talent

on May. 20 2010 at 11:09 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

I love this, it's awesome!  You have talent.  ;)

-Rose