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May 6, 2010
By G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.


I keep falling into abyss
A million emotions go through me
Shame, sadness but above all fear
Fear to fail
Fear to unachieved
Fear to opinion
When I finally fall
To this unmerciful ground
All I can see in this test
Is blank



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on Jun. 23 2010 at 7:58 pm
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.

Thank you so much for leaving a comment. I'm really happy that you like the poem and that it's your favorite out of the ones I've posted. Thanks again. :-)

brit15 said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 6:07 pm
The title of the poem itself makes me want to read it i really like how you led up to the ending with this poem stating all the things to fear. I like poems that are written like that and i think you did good on this one. This is my favorite of all your poems! :)