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You Leaned

May 17, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I kissed you, yes
But it wasn't my move.
I moved closer to you,
But you leaned.

I'd stood on my tippy-toes
Our lips had met
But only for a second
You leaned

Thoughts of our "out-of-bounds play"
Made me happy, but my joy was cut short;
You're just a player
With another girl on your court.

The author's comments:
Ahhhh. Junior High. Gotta love it. (Oh by the by, my fingers were dripping with sarcasm as I typed that!)
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ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:54 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I know!!!! haha. :P
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 5:19 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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LOL!!!! Yes! cant find a pencil sharpener and sometimes i can't find another pencil....well at least not in the same room haha :D
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 4:43 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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grrr. yes! that annoys me so much! then I usually cant find a pencil sharpener either. >:( grr
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 7:21 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Haha u angry! It's hard to imagine!!! :D u ever write a poem wen ur angry then break ur pencil led nd that makes u even more upset? Lol yea it's not fun hahaha
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 6:03 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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thanks!!! I loved writing this piece because i was so angry

:)

alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:54 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Lol!!!!! Ah your fingers were dripping with sarcasm! Gotta luv u! Haha the last stanza I just loved and the whole thing was great!
genesis27000 SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:52 am
genesis27000 SILVER, Mexia, Texas
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WOW. This is so great. It's so awesome how you just captured those horrible feelings.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 6:08 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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ohh awesome. :))) a 'secret' reference
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 5:15 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I ended it like that because it happened by a basketball court. hah decided to end it by the location! yea... :)
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:09 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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Thank you! :)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:07 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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ooh, i liked how u worded the ending! kooll :)