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Who am i?

June 25, 2010
By Ashly SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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Ashly SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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Who am I?
a girl that has been hurt,

a girl who has everything to hide,
a girl who wants nothing more than good friends,

a girl who walks right on the line too afraid to stray in fear, that she will fall and die,
a girl who has nothing to do but hide her feelings from all,

a girl who dies inside when someone walks away,a girl who tries to never cry

a girl who feels some what unstable, a girl that doesnt know herself...

© Anton J., Philadelphia, PA

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blitsnik SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 1:01 pm
blitsnik SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you must mount the gallows, give a coin to the headman, a jest to the crowd, and meet the drop with a smile on your lips.&quot;

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I like it, you can feel the emotion in it. the only thing is, you are describing who you are, but then say you dont know yourself. it kind of goes against ti. good job nontheless.
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:59 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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a girl that is very talented in writing poetry... :)