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I See Where You're Coming From

August 10, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

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I guess I kind of
See where you're coming from.
I mean, I'm leaving and
I know we cant be together
While apart.
And you were great to me
And I'm sad about leaving.
But I hear that's not really the reason you broke me.
Broke my heart that is.
So if that's not the real reason,
I guess i CAN'T
See where you're coming from.

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:15 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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thanks!!! lov ya elle
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:06 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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well thanks!! it means a lot to me that you commented on my stuff!!!
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:58 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

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i do that too! wake up randomly i mean nd have a peom in my head.. or its usually at dinner. ill b eating. get a poem nd end up writing it on a napkin lol

weel i noe ur work nd u noe mine...so its no surprise u did UH-mazing. once again=)

nice job girl=)

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:01 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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ooh! It's short, sweet and to the point. LOVE IT!! :)
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 4:10 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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Thanks it was kinda funny cuz i woke up at like 3 in the morning, went to my desk and wrote this!!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:08 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I really like this one - you said so much with so little. I can relate. Keep writing1