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The Pain of my Love

September 4, 2010
By Mcflyjr BRONZE, Wilmington, Massachusetts
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My love is never failing,
Always there,
Always hoping,
Always faithful

My love has it's ups,
It has it's downs,
But one thing It has alot of,
Is pain,
Cruel, unjust pain.

Pain caused by the world,
Pain caused by fate,
Pain caused by me,
Pain caused by you.

You don't take my love,
But my love will only take you,
No one else,
Not even myself

My love is all for you,
None held back for myself,
Yet you toy with it,
You hurt me the only way possible,
By rejecting my love.

Rejecting me.

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

The author's comments:
I wrote this about a girl I've liked for 2 going on 3 years, and can't get over her. Even though she hates me, I can't stop loving her.
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Camii GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:06 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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it's really good! i'd prefer that it rhymed more but i really iked it:) good job!
butterfly123 said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 6:41 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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another beautiful piece! keep writing!