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You Danced With Me

September 24, 2010
By mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream -Edgar Allen Poe


I still hear your lullabies
Crashing waves and painted skies
Hear the music in the street
You took my hand and danced with me

And when I cried you held me tight
Helped me through the lonely night
We watched the moon and fireflies
You pulled me close I closed my eyes

Every night I’d see your face
Your wicked smile your warm embrace
And when life got hard to bear
I’d just make believe you were here


You promised you would never go
And leave me standing on my own
You’d love me till you died
I should have known you’d lie

I still hear your lullabies
Crashing waves and painted skies
Hear the music in the street
Watched you walk away from me


The author's comments:
This was inspired by one of my favorite songs "Almost Lover" by A fine Frenzy. Chack it out

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on Oct. 5 2010 at 4:35 pm
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream -Edgar Allen Poe

yeah that one was a little hard but thanks so much for being so dedicated

on Oct. 4 2010 at 8:08 pm
singergurl12 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales are true, not because they tell us dragons exist, but because they tell us dragons can be beaten.

as always, your emotion is amazing, your imagry astounds, and you continue to be my favorite author on teenink. how does it feel to have a dedicated reader? anyway the only problem i had was it seemed to get a lil off the rhyme pattern when you said
"You’d love me till you died
I should have known you’d lie"