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To Negative person from post-positive person

November 3, 2010
By you_are_awesome GOLD, London, Other
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You suffocate this room,
you words are like weights
dragging on the sun
criticising everything and anything you see.


The rain has turned to pins falling,
the sky has turned to grey
the sun is slowly falling down
and being put away

You’re always right, I’m always wrong
ive never heard you sing a song
ive never seen you smile kindly
you turn your head and gossip blindly

I see you laugh and know its mean
your soft side hardly ever seen
but I know deep down it must be there
or else why would I try to care?

© Kaelee L., Petersburg, MI

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