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Smothered in Eternal Blue

November 10, 2010
By Ashluv GOLD, Seaford, Delaware
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Laugh me to death
As long as on my neck, I feel your breath
Swoon me to suffocate
Your chocolate irises lead me to my terrible fate
Kiss me to kill
I'm tasting you until I've had my fill
Touch me to tears
And I'll think about where we'll be in a few years
Hold me to hurt
Even if at times i seem a little curt
Enchant me to end
Flutters to my heart consistently send
Because nothing else matters when I'm with you
And when you're gone, the world is smothered by an eternal blue

© Maria H., Cincinnati, OH

The author's comments:
In a new relationship, exciting emotions are great, but there is always going to be an end where you hit that crashing point. This poem talks about the devastation and hurt that goes along with wanting a relationship to work out so badly.
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