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This Time of Year

November 24, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


This time of year
The rain is plentiful
It makes everything here beautiful
It’s simply amazing
Autumn turns to winter
For me her green eyes lead the way
I really love this time in the country
The cold breeze coming through my window
And nipping at my skin
I have to spend it with someone
I choose my green eyed friend


The author's comments:
I love green eyes

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on Jan. 15 2011 at 2:43 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I had a feeling when you chose that season to say in paticular. haha

on Jan. 12 2011 at 6:30 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Yeah, it was another of those rainy day poems... I started it then Autumn texted me so I guess I was like... thinking about that and started to form it more around her with the added effect of the seasons

on Jan. 11 2011 at 2:12 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Liked the ending but in the beginning it felt like you couldn't fully put your feelings into words