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Until the End
February 20, 2011
We are in kindergarten
Playing during recess.
He shared his fruit snacks
And I shared my juice.
No troubles, no worries.
We are in Elementary school.
We live in two different worlds.
He goes to Valle Vista. Me-Little Lake.
We visit each other as much as possible.
No troubles, some worries.
Middle school rolls around.
Same classes, same hobbies, same lunch time.
We value each other’s company.
His house, then my house.
Some troubles, some worries.
High school.
Countless hours spent together.
Friendship stronger than ever.
He is my brother. Me – his sister … basically.
We graduate in two years.
Him – the army.
Me – Brigham Young University.
Some troubles, many worries, yet great memories.
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This article has 7 comments.
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 4:48 pm
GO COUGARS!
penguin35 said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 2:40 pm
I love this! It's cute! :) Repeating lines can be a powerful poetic device, and I like how you repeated the line about troubles and worries. I especially like the end; "some troubles, many worries, yet great memories". So it has a happy ending.
whateverjuliet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 9:58 pm
i loved it! especially the end!!!!keep writing!
connorfinklea said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 8:53 pm
That's my cousin!!!!!!!!!!!! but dang!!! this poem is really good! I want to hear more from you kelbyrom!
sofii said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 4:57 pm
wow that's really good!(: Your going to Brigham YOung University? are you mormon? i am :3 but nice poem btw(: i love it
writingrox2 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 4:01 pm
wow this is really good!!! i love the ending. please read my work!
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Favorite Quote:
"Life To Short To Live With Reqrets"
Great Jon
<3
I had caught on at the end lol that you were talking about uur brother.