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Innocent Killer

March 3, 2011
By SeerKnowsBest SILVER, Pryor, Oklahoma
SeerKnowsBest SILVER, Pryor, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
i have so many favourite quotes, but one that has stuck with me for years is " to die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan, Peter Pan, j. m. barrie


Rewind, rewind!
Please change her mind
And take these tears away
Too slow to realise how she feels
To her mind you'll be a slave
Listen, listen!
Lean in close
Feel the blood pulse in her throat
Tempting, tempting
It may be
To leave her standing mercilessly
Save her from herself and cease
To be passing by her misery
Be the hero for yourself
And end this vicious cycle
Be the hero for the world
And
Save her, save her!
Can't you see?
Drowning in pathetic pleas
Too late, too late!
Goodbye for now
You'll meet again, again, don't fear!
When you cross the endless sea
So join her, join her!
Reminisce
About every single thing she missed
When you ignored pathetic pleas
For that's the circle of life,
You see


The author's comments:
I wrote this after i read th1rteen r3asons why by jay asher.

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on Apr. 5 2011 at 6:53 pm
SeerKnowsBest SILVER, Pryor, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
i have so many favourite quotes, but one that has stuck with me for years is " to die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan, Peter Pan, j. m. barrie

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on Apr. 4 2011 at 4:23 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

You are very welcome :)

on Apr. 3 2011 at 8:53 pm
I enjoy this

on Apr. 2 2011 at 7:51 pm
SeerKnowsBest SILVER, Pryor, Oklahoma
5 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have so many favourite quotes, but one that has stuck with me for years is " to die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan, Peter Pan, j. m. barrie

thank you and thank you to all the nice reviews

on Mar. 30 2011 at 5:41 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This is good :) I really like it!