Nightmare | Teen Ink


March 18, 2011
By Flouter GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Flouter GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 34 comments

I wake up gasping; terrified
Skin in a cold sweat.
Same nightmare
Same faces
I saw you with her
Your arms caressing her
Her smooth face cupped in your loving hands
It kills me
A blade through my heard is less painful
I would rather die a thousand painful deaths
Than even think of you being with her.
The very idea of you with another
Brings tears to my eyes
And cries from my breaking heart

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on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:26 pm
amandadel BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" - Robin Williams, Dead Poets Society

I accidently rated it only two stars because it was the first time i was rating something! I'm sorry its definitely more than that! I really liked it. (:

on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:25 am
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.

this is a great article. i can really realte to this.. keep up the great work. (: you should check my work out sometime.

kdwern said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 2:28 pm
im awesome

on Apr. 12 2011 at 10:12 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Aww...can really relate to this, expecially when my prom is coming soon and yeah.. I think your an awesome writer, please keep writting with all your emotions =]

on Apr. 12 2011 at 8:51 am
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't about the number of moments you take to breathe, but about the number of moments that take your breathe away.

I love it