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I'm A Song

March 6, 2011
By Lauren_Faith996 SILVER, White Planes, Kentucky
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Lauren_Faith996 SILVER, White Planes, Kentucky
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&quot;Of all the things God gave us, the greatest is hope.&quot;<br /> -Dr. Eugene Shoenfeld.

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I'm drowning.
I'm drowning in my tears and despair, I'm holding on just barely.
Because nobody can see through my lies, through this persona I hide behind.
I use this pretty face, the dimples, curls, and big blue eyes
This sweet soft spoken voice
This soft skin that blushes at the slightest sound
To make everybody think that I am okay.
But look into my blue eyes
And tell me that you love me
And you'll see the disbelief.
He did that to me.
So while the world keeps spinning around
I'm gonna fall apart
But pretend that I'm okay.
And you won't know the difference.
Would it matter to anybody
If they knew I was drifting away?
I'm so far gone, I can barely see you standing there.
I'm so far gone, I'm on the verge of not really being able to care.
You thought you knew me
Well you were wrong.
Guess I really am
A tragic
Love song.

© Ashton D., Vincennes, IN

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Yourboggert1 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 7:59 am
Yourboggert1 BRONZE, Welford, South Carolina
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dark cannot drive out dark; only light can do that. hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.

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i can dig it.
Inksy SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 3:20 pm
Inksy SILVER, A, Utah
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&quot;Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead&quot;<br /> ~Benjamin Frankiln<br /> &quot;Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love.&quot;<br /> ~Moulin Rouge

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FANTASTIC. I'm pretty sure I'm going to be putting this on my favorites... it's beautiful. And soooo relateable. Just... wow. Keep writing, you're amazing. Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!
Aubrie PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 4:31 pm
Aubrie PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
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&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for what I am than loved for what I am not.&quot; -Kurt Cobain<br /> &quot;you know my name, but you don&#039;t know my story.&quot;<br /> &quot;The only true mistake is the one you don&#039;t learn from.&quot;

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WONDERFUL poem. Enough said.
SmileyFace13 said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 5:02 pm
This is freaking beautiful!! :) i really love it, and i know how it feels to hid behind a smile and trust me it gets better :) i've never been happier. and be proud your an amazing writer full of passion that shows through your work.
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 1:45 pm
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That was beautiful. And yeah, love has a way of doing that to you, doesn't it? Feel free to read any of my poems.
EyesofBlueFire GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 12:25 pm
EyesofBlueFire GOLD, Belleville, Illinois
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This was really good. Some of your rhythm seems to slip, but the passion behind the words makes up for that. The technical stuff is nothing to the feeling I got after I read your poem. Keep writing, and remember to keep your head up, you can't always hide.
spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:56 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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good job rated u 5/5.....visit me plzz and comment...thank u