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Wound
April 2, 2011
You tell me I can't
you tell me I won't
you tell me don't ask
you act like a bloke
but I tell you
you better watch out
because your getting me really wound
© Olivia E., Alto, MI
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This article has 11 comments.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:35 pm
wow thanks that's sounds interesting
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:55 am
Kids and adults alike are always doing that, but to our town! whats up with that? they are all like: Oh this place is a dump, this town is only filled with losers that will never leave and only make this town work. I say: well instead of complaning do something about it! ... my dad is the boss of a company that works with Microsoft, and does buisness world wide, and all from a tiny town were half the people say its trash and then do nothing ... so ya i know how this works :P
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:01 pm
i agree no person is going to make me stop my dreams and they never will stop until the day i stop breathing
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:16 pm
Great poem! Yeah, I hope that no matter how much criticism I get, I will continue to pursue my dreams. My only criticism: 'your' should be 'you're'.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:08 am
thank you i'll look at some of ur stuff
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:28 pm
thank you tell people to check out my other poems
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:22 pm
it's very helpful thank you
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:35 pm
I liked the rhythm but I think your strength when you're writing is your imagery and this didn't put that across as well as your other poems did. I think this poem would need to be longer to help the reader understand where your coming fom. Hope that's helpful :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 10:20 pm
anyone plz comment i love to hear feed back
