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April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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On red days I am full of fiery passion
like a determined falcon
swooping to catch it's prey
on a simmering hot day

© Norma S., El Paso, TX

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This was a class assignment. We were supposed to make a simile that connected colors with emotions.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:34 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks u have a great image of what this is :P
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:01 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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I like the picture that it gives me ... i see the top of the falcon flying over a lake with it's wing covering a tip of the sun's reflection. Then it flies over a patch of pines and dives into a ravine that has a small streaming river at the bottom that lets plants grow and small prey thrive. ... i like that picture :) 
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:10 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you i don't really make mong poems i think i've made like 2
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on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:26 pm
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Your connection with red and passion was quite accurate. This is another nice, simple poem. Good job!
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 4:36 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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tanks so much
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:40 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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That was really good I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!! ;))
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 9:42 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks that's nice
iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:55 pm
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best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.<br /> laugh ur heart out<br /> dance in the rain<br /> cherish the moment<br /> ignore the pain<br /> live, laugh, love<br /> forgive&amp;forget<br /> lifes too short to be<br /> living with regrets

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calm down i love it at least you are such a great poet love ya
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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pleas ecomment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 10:20 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback