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Burning lose

April 29, 2011
By LizzyChuma SILVER, Follansbee, West Virginia
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LizzyChuma SILVER, Follansbee, West Virginia
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You can fall from the sky,<br /> you can fall from a tree,<br /> but the best way to fall<br /> is in love with me &lt;3

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I felt the burn
you said I'll learn.
The cut was deeper
than usual, but the
blood ran less,
and a bit darker
and there was just
a little bit of
numbness. I felt
a sting and a pinch
then I saw a flashback
of our happy moments
together.
What does this mean?
Am i losing you?
I can feel the burning,
and all I'm learning is
I can't bear the thought
of losing you because
I love you.

© Whitney T., Glenpool, OK

The author's comments:
I wrote this after my boyfriend of five months told me that I would be sorry if I continued to cut myself. I learned and now I am still with him. He gave me a second chance in life and I love every minute of it
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