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IT'S ALL IN THE EYES ....

May 1, 2011
By Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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I stay silent as the night
as i stand still under this beautiful moonlit sky,
soaking in the serenity of the world around me.
i hear the murmer of the breeze
which brings with it the cool and calmness to the,
tired souls after the days chaos.

But i stand still,
my eyes fixed at a point in the
vast endless sky.
a storm is raging somewhere,
despite the calmness of the night
that haunts me tonight.

The storm is raging within me
but i refuse to speak of it,
so does my body....

But still she comes to me
and holds me in a loving embrace
"it's going to be alright son'
dont worry....it will", she says.

I look at her astounded, as she
smiles and hugs me again
and says,
" Your eyes betray your body son,
they speak everything and
mine can read them perfectly."

N ow even i smile,
as i relax in her arms, now sure
of the fact that
IT'S ALL IN THE EYES ,
of every mother and son !!

© Christine S., Arlington, VA

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Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 6:35 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Aww ... I get it .. There's no harm in finding a little time out from your daily routine to make her feel really loved and appreciated ! p.s : EVery child has a special relation with their parents , it's just that it's not easy to spot !
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 6:31 am
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Well done! I read it twice to fully get it! I wish I had that kind of relationship with my mom.. Not saying we have a bad one, just not as special as that, y'know?
.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 4:04 am
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That was Amazing and beautiful, I'll say- i love it...
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Beautiful.... Emotional... I loved this piece with all of my heart!(: 5/5
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omg i loved it!!!!!!
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Very intriguing, I think poetry is what you are strongest at. Just work on grammar. Great job!
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on Dec. 28 2011 at 12:31 am
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This was amazing...shows a true bond between mother and son....keep it up!!
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
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wow thats amazing
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:16 pm
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No problem:)  And yah, I do.
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 1:44 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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hey thanks .... ya i do have a special relationship with my mum .... don't all of us ????? XD
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:44 pm
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This is so cute :)  You've got a special relationship with your mom, don't you??  It seems like it from your poems.
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on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:08 pm
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I agree with you so much!
Tigergirl said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:01 pm
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Oh really cool..... :)
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Aw, it's sweet. :)
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*tear* so heartwarming...:) 
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 7:24 am
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Always my pleasure..And neither did I think there were much Indians...But then again I thought of searching..So I went and checked in advance search...There I found out that there were many from India...
Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 3:04 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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hey thanx sakina .... i dint know that there were any more indians on teenink till now .... thanx for ur feedback, really appreciate it ...
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 5:39 am
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It's an awesome poem..And it has lots of emotions filled in ti..U r truely a very good writer...
sherberteater GOLD said...
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This is really good. I hope you do great on the your poems to come. :)

 

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 10:34 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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ey thanx ... you are the first teenink member to comment on my work ...