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May 11, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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I feel them
like a bird's wings
flapping inside me
waiting to burst
with the
love, joy, passion, and energy
they had before
but i realize it is only
them sending me a
message
I an happy up here in heaven

© Kimber E., Yorktown, VA

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I was thinking about my great-grandma who recently passed who I feel inside me everday your loved ones never leave you
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:32 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks a lot :P
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:22 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i really like it, its really sweet :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:10 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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how so? since i don't know who u r
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 12:53 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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Loved it sooo much i can relate ...i miss you

 

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:00 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you !! :P
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:45 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

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It's a great poem...
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks and i feel her with me always sorry about the mistake
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:18 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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Great imagery, once again.  I know how you feel; my grandmother I was very close to passed away when I was ten and I still feel her near me.  My only criticism: you forgot to capitalize 'i'.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:20 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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don't u just love grandmas they're awesome they make the world go round along with crayons ninjas sesame street moms and sugar
austenite GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:10 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

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I love the imagery you have in all your poems! And I really like how you wrote this for your late great-grandma - I wrote one for mine as well!
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 6:54 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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sorry thanks
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:28 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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That was so sweet I noticed two mistakes but nothing major: you put "an" instead of "am" and you forgot to capitalize the "I" one the eighth line.  Other than that really good!!!!! :))