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Danger!

June 7, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe


To night is the night
to get what belongs to me
Don't try to stop me
I'll snap, claw
Out your eyes
I'm a monster
On the run
No turning back now
I all get what I want
And what I want
Is you
Your blood, soul, sanity
I'm a monster
on the run
and I'm after
YOU


The author's comments:
I wrote this during ISD because my teacher said I would write

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 11:53 am
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

Thank you:) and I'll have to fix that lol.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 1:25 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Great poem!  It's dark, but not overly so.  My only criticism is that 'to night' should be 'tonight'.  Other than that, that was amazing! :)