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One Minute In Time

June 20, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


Mr.Moore standing tall
helping others
the overpowering sound
of talking
squeaking clarinets
the smell of lunch
lingering
in the
air
creak go the
stands
the cold touch of
metal
on my fingers as
I lift my flute
to my mouth
Whistle!
I've made my first
noise on my flute
at !:30 p.m.
O
who did that?
me, I squeak
Good job?
I changed in that one minute


The author's comments:
Noneof this is fiction, all this happened every detail ever word

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on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:30 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

yeah, i get what you mean. i'm a junior, and it took my parents a long time to realize that i actually am pretty serious about music. they only let me start band because we have instruments. i play my two uncles' tenors, my great grandfather had a silver clarinet i'm using, and my brother played the trumpet for a few years and is giving up (which we all expected) so i get the trumpet now. i'm sure your parents will understand, though! and if it comes down to it, you can always self-teach yourself. that's how i'm doing it, now. lessons on the tenor b/c it's my main instrument, but i'm teaching myslef on the clarinet and trumpet.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i want to learn how to the sax,clarinet, bass flute,cello, and i did a little piano i can also play the piccolo and I want to take singing lessons my parents want to know where I'm going to get the money it upsets me because they think i don't takae my music seriously and i won't stick to any grrrrrrr!!!

on Jul. 7 2011 at 6:49 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

not to play favorites or anything, but the saxophone is amazing ;) haha, a lot of my friends play the flute, so that's a good instrument, too! i'm re-learning how to play the clarinet and also how to play the trumpet this year, too.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:16 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i really want to play the sax and a bunch of other intsruments

on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:26 am
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

I play the saxophone, and this totally reminded me of what it was like that first time i played! great job, i love the simplicity of the poem!

on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:20 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks people :P

on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:07 am
FrownMonaLisa SILVER, Arlington, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened

It is a good poem. Your basic description of the world around you is quite good. Good job on this one!

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on Jul. 6 2011 at 9:42 am
awayra BRONZE, Bucharest, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"i am a woman who enjoys herself very much: sometimes i win, sometimes i loose."

you use so simple words and structures to sketch your experience! u have a very unusual style if you ask me, yet quite pleasant