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time breaks

July 10, 2011
By ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
119 articles 54 photos 117 comments

time breaks



this time called dawn



the sun warms its rays



as the moon turns away



ashamed



of it's pale insuffice light



and being short of silverware



the mist runsaway



anyway



at the touch of daylight



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ALM007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 5:19 pm
ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
119 articles 54 photos 117 comments

hey sorry i missed you, i'm online now

i think i just missed again on poetry chat


on Apr. 18 2012 at 8:17 pm
TheGreightGutzby SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
8 articles 10 photos 55 comments

i can chat now if you want.

 


ALM007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 8:02 pm
ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
119 articles 54 photos 117 comments
hey you should let me know when you'll be online, i have this story i wanted to toss around with someone..

ALM007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 7:29 pm
ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
119 articles 54 photos 117 comments

Hey, thanks. You seem to be the only one who likes my poetry.

I'm pretty good. Kind of tired of the world. Just want to get away. You?


on Apr. 14 2012 at 8:22 pm
TheGreightGutzby SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
8 articles 10 photos 55 comments
Hey I really like this one especially the line "as the moon turns away ashamed of its pale insufficient light" How have youve been?