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Lines of Sight

August 8, 2011
By savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.


When you’re the youngest of the family
A midget next to all
You look up to everyone
As they walk proud and tall

But since you’re the youngest
They grow up before you do
One by one moving away
As you wait til you can too

First you let go of siblings
As they go away to college
Moving into dorms
In search of dreams and knowledge

Then you let go of parents
When you finally turn eighteen
Going out to conquer the world
As the new king or queen

Then come the weddings
When they find that special someone
You have to share your older brother
Since his new life has begun

Next are the funerals
When the older generations pass away
You live all alone now
With no one to share the day

By now you’re used to the loss
The pain and the sorrow
You forgot about the part
Where life gives a new tomorrow

Perhaps you’ve found your partner
Hope to start a family
Together you chase your dreams
To stars across the galaxy

Now as your children leave
Come back the pain and sorrow
You remember all the times you had
Although it seems an age ago

You realize now if you hadn’t lost them
Your parents, siblings, and kids
You wouldn’t know how much they meant to you
As life ebbs from your wrinkled eyelids


The author's comments:
I hope that this poem helps people let go and understand that letting go is the price we pay to realize just how much they mean to us.

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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 5:34 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Wow! I can't believe you have seven brothers and sisters!

That's a lot.... that must be nice, you must never get lonely! But that also must be hard because you always have to take care of them. 

I only have one younger sister so...

I once knew a family in 1st grade where there were nine siblings. The mother had to take care of all of them because the father just died of a freak heart attack. They were new at my school and they were very nice. I used to always play with them after school, they really liked me and we such fun together. Brings back good memories! :)


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 5:27 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

A lot of your poetry reminds me of       The Green Mile and I've fell like I've said that to you but when I checked your work for the comments I've written, it doesn't come up. :(

So let me read your poetry again and let me see if that thought still comes up! 


on Aug. 11 2011 at 2:02 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

My goodness, Stargirl, eight children?

on Aug. 11 2011 at 2:02 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

The meter, itself, was (in my modest opinion) a little off; so the poem didn't read so easily. But I still liked "Lines of Sight" very much, because I could relate to it. It reminded me a bit of Tom Hanks at the end of The Green Mile, until the end of the poem, when your wisdom was presented to the reader. :)

on Aug. 11 2011 at 1:39 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

I really wonder sometimes what it's like to live in a family as the youngest of eight children, as my littlest sister does. 

This poem is beautiful, though I don't think your point came across too well. It was a joy to read anyway, keep on writing, I look forward to reading more and more of your work, savetheplanet :)