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September 14, 2011
By HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
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HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
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&quot;A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment &lt;/3&quot;<br /> &quot;When the going gets tough, knock someone out&quot; ;D &lt;3<br /> &quot;It&#039;s easy to fail, hard to succeed&quot;

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You can't see
how you've hurt me.
I try to tell you
only what's true
but you wont hear
so goodbye my dear.

You played with my heart
and that wasn't smart.
Your gonna pay
maybe not today
but I guarantee it will be soon.

© Gabriela W., Acton, MA

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guys shouldn't mess with me. End of story.
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HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:20 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment &lt;/3&quot;<br /> &quot;When the going gets tough, knock someone out&quot; ;D &lt;3<br /> &quot;It&#039;s easy to fail, hard to succeed&quot;

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That's cool :) I'll know who to call when in danger thenn lol
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:18 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

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&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Definitely won't be messing with you, but if you want help with revenge, you know, I'm pretty good at helping in fights.  I'm a quarterstaff dueler.
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 2:09 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
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&quot;A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment &lt;/3&quot;<br /> &quot;When the going gets tough, knock someone out&quot; ;D &lt;3<br /> &quot;It&#039;s easy to fail, hard to succeed&quot;

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Thanks :) It's just how I feel is all :)
Lizette SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 8:07 pm
Lizette SILVER, Delphos, Ohio
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 short and to the point.  nicely done

 

HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 5:52 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment &lt;/3&quot;<br /> &quot;When the going gets tough, knock someone out&quot; ;D &lt;3<br /> &quot;It&#039;s easy to fail, hard to succeed&quot;

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thanks...I try my best.
darksky said...
on Sep. 18 2011 at 2:57 pm
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wow, that was amazing.