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Frozen

October 19, 2011
By Kpalo14 SILVER, Wilson, Michigan
Kpalo14 SILVER, Wilson, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't know what you have until you've lost it. So treasure everything you do have and never let it go


My body's frozen.
I'm in shock.
Tears drop down.
My breathing stops.

I cared for him,
Right from the start.
And in return,
He broke my heart.



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A_Journey GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:53 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
16 articles 2 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Muse of Poetry should not know that roses in manure grow. ~The Formula, Langston Hughes<br /> You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted ties. You may trod me in the very dirt, but still, like dirt, I rise. ~Still I Rise, Maya Angelou

I like this. Short and (bitter)sweet. Great job! :D Can you check out some of my work?

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 9:33 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

Really short, but good. Who ever said poetry had to be long, right? Maybe you could check some of my stuff sometime?