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Memories

October 19, 2011
By DarkestSunshine GOLD, Mill Valley, California
DarkestSunshine GOLD, Mill Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
Doubt me...I dare you


You walk through the sand
Breathing in the spray.
Humming a long forgotten tune.
While the horses
Gallop in the waves.
You dig your toes into
The cold rough sand
As the tide erodes it around you.
You inhale then release
A puff of warm
in the cold gray sky.
You observe the way you have come
And the way you must go
Both ways hold perfect serenity
Unbreached by the footprints
You though you left.
Nothing is forever
Even the footprints of greatness must fade.


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on Apr. 5 2012 at 7:51 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really liked this poem, the ending was beautiful. Once again I  find myself rating 5-star.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:15 pm
DarkestSunshine GOLD, Mill Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Doubt me...I dare you

Thank you. It was for my dad

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 12:57 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

It's so beautiful!!!! I absolutely love it!! It's gorgeously emotional and expressive! Definitely 5/5 material!!  x x x x x  <3<3<3