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If 10/13/11

October 13, 2011
By J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
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J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
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What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

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If raindrops were kisses, I would send you showers.
If I were a superhero, I would give you all of my powers.
If hugs were water, I would send you the sea.
If love were a person, I would send you me.
If forever were tomorrow, I would give you today.
If music were words, I would give you everything I know how to say.
If letters were stories, I would write you a book.
If visions were pictures, I would take a closer look.
If passion were hearts, I would give you mine.
If pain were a first aid kit, I would make sure you were fine.
If time were the future, I would give you my whole entire life.
If a ring were a preacher, I would have you as my wife.

© Andy O., Highland Village, TX

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I was inspired by youtube, this person had made a song for this girl and It really inspired me to write a poem.
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secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:24 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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this is amazing
LittleMidnight PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:56 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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This had got to be one of the sweetest poems I have ever read, I loved it!!!!!!!! Good job!!!!
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:51 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.

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Oh wow, this is amazing! I really like this! :)
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 8:22 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Beautiful poem, very sweet and well written! Think that you could check out my poem, please?
J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 4:44 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
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I don't mind just don't say it's your own work.
Giggity4456 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:02 am
Giggity4456 GOLD, Sheridan, Oregon
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VERY good. (: Mind if I send it to my girlfriend?