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Cherished

November 5, 2011
By EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor


I cherish the moments we spend together,
I tresure the love we share,
When I'm with you I'll only cry tears of joy,
You make me smile all the time,
Forever our love will stay,
I've finally found the missing part of me,
One kiss good night is all I'll ever ask,
When your with me you'll never have to worry,
With me you'll never need to fear because I'll always be there for you,
No need to cry forever I'll be by your side,
I'm glad loving you isn't a crime,
Or I'd have to face jail time,
No one could ever keep me away from you,
Forever and always our love remains true,
I would love to stay and talk all day so I'll end this with a line you already know Forever and always I love you,
How I feel words can not explain,
I love you more each day


The author's comments:
Writting poems is the only way i can express myself in my own way

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on Dec. 5 2011 at 8:29 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

hello everyone im Shiann, im very shy and im also looking for a emo guy.

btw im single......u can txt me heres my # (570)-419-9944


on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:23 pm
Distant_Freedom DIAMOND, Nowhere, Pennsylvania
50 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever. Live as if you&#039;ll die today. -James Dean

very good. But not everything in this world is about love. There are lots of things full of pain as well. Read my poem, What I Feel.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:16 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?&quot;

I find it very touching. 

on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:11 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan&quot;<br /> -by. Blood On The Dance Floor

hey thanks for reading my poem.....lol be sure  to check my page often cuz i gonna be writing new poems all the time.......oh and when ever i write a poem it tells people about me.....like "Cherished" this one is to show people that i'm kind and very strong willed. i would do almost anything for anyone.

TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 3:52 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

If only all love were like this...great job!

 


Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:19 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you&#039;ll die today. Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever.

LOVE IT!!!! It's so beautiful!! OMG, just gorgeous!! x x x WEll done and keep it up hun!!!! <3<3<3<3

on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:15 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

Great theme, but you might work on the metering. The lines just didn't flow together enough for my taste. Overall good though.  <><

on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:46 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;Live like no tomorrow\&quot;

awww so cuteeeee

 


on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:19 am
toto1601 BRONZE, Springs Co., Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I am so clever that sometimes I don&#039;t understand a single word of what I am saying.&rdquo; <br /> ― Oscar Wilde<br /> <br /> &ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss<br /> <br /> &ldquo;It is better to remain silent at the risk of being thought a fool, than to talk and remove all doubt of it.&rdquo; <br /> ― Maurice Switzer

this is a really good poem... thanks for reading my poem...