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Three Blind Eyes

November 17, 2011
By Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.


THREE BLIND EYES:

-I watch him walk slowly down the block
being guided carefully by his loyal dog
and I envy the bond between them
as I see him feed her little treats
Which she looks at longingly then eats.
He smiles triumphantly


-His clouded, filmy eyes
tell a constricting story of all the lies
he has been told because he is blind.
They think they can trick him
and act as if he doesn't exist to them,
but to me he is the reason I am happy.


-I will sometimes help him across the road
and help unlock his front door into his beautiful home.
There are pictures of his wife in every room.
Wow, she was so beautiful.
But he fell in love with her soul, not her beauty.
He couldn't see her. His children put the pictures there.


-Three blind eyes.
His two sightless eyes that see his loved ones in his mind's eye.


The author's comments:
I don't know why I wrote this poem it sort of just came to me, the idea of a blind man and the writer having a special relationship.

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on Dec. 20 2011 at 1:37 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This is gorgeous! The rhyming fits with the poem and doesn't hinder it. This is very creative and I love the story you told with it. Well done! I don't have really any criticism. 

Sinc321 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 3:42 pm
Sinc321 BRONZE, Centerville, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hold the line!"

wow.... very nice!!!

 


TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:47 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

It's such an interesting idea! u wrote it beautifully nice job!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:35 pm
slaborin98 BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Live like no tomorrow\"

ur a good person with a good heart anyone would be lucky 2 have a frnd as great as  u il ove ur work

 


Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:17 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

AWWW!! Thanks so much guys!! I'll definitely return the favour!! x x x x <3<3<3

on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:13 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Oh this is so moving! I love this one! It's like a riddle!

on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:11 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

WOW that was so, so, so beautiful and impacetful.... Wow, I love it!!

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:09 pm
zombiescream.98 SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Acting isn't lying, it's behaving truthfully in false situations,"

Wow! I love the last two stanzas the most they're amazing!

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 2:25 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thanks hun!! That's so sweet!! x x

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 2:15 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

this is precious. it gave me the chills, in a heart-warming way. i love how authentic it is! so creative and deep, yet with a great simple flow! keep up the great work!

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:18 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thanks hun!!!! That's so sweet!! thank you!! your poems are amazing aswell!!! I especially love 'Eyes of the Dead'. Gorgeous!! Thanks gal!!! x x x x x x x x x x

on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:15 pm
littlelilith SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your perspective may very well be the determining factor in whether you pass the test."

-__- I keep posting things that people have already said...

on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:14 pm
littlelilith SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your perspective may very well be the determining factor in whether you pass the test."

This was so beautiful, it almost made me cry! I like the line,

"But he fell in love with her soul, not her beauty."

This poem was very touching, not angsty or depressing. We need more poems like this on TI. BTW, you're awesome, keep writing! <3


Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:07 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thanks Jen!!!x x x x x

 


Jennypig GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 2:03 pm
Jennypig GOLD, Winslow, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Get living or get dying -Stepen King
We are a little weird and life is a little weird, so when we find someone who's weirdness is compatible with our own, we fall in a mutual weirdness and call it love. -Dr. Seuss

This is an unusual format like idk maybe its just unusual for me but i love it =) just sayin

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 6:09 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

thank you so much hun!!!xxxx

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 6:08 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

AAWWW!! Thanks guys!! xxxxx

on Nov. 22 2011 at 5:18 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like it. I like that it reads like a story, I like the images it shows as well.

on Nov. 22 2011 at 4:21 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I love this! I love how it tells a story and saying that he's been told many lies. The line, "He fell in love with her soul, not her beauty" is really good. Great job

on Nov. 22 2011 at 1:30 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Very nice, I like the way that it tells a story. :)

-Lilac