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raindrops

November 28, 2011
By carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind


Rain drops rushing down the window drip drip
rain drops racing down to see who can get to the bottom first
Rain makes all the plants very happy.
pit pat hearing the rain fall on the roof making relaxing sounds
wind swishing in the trees making them wet


The author's comments:
I got inspired by having it raining all day and when I was in class.

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Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:53 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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short sweet GOOD!

on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:56 pm
iWriter365 BRONZE, College Park , Maryland
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
You're off to great places, today is your day, your mountain is waiting, so get on your way- Dr. Seuss

Very nice, :)

on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:43 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks that means a lot

on Dec. 24 2011 at 7:43 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

your welcome and thanks

on Dec. 24 2011 at 3:11 pm
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

i really like your poem thanks for reading my poem .i had to leave and when i came back you were gone thanks : )

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 12:50 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

Aww, I don't know why, but it made me think of a little baby. It just sounded adorable. Haha, good job!

on Dec. 24 2011 at 12:43 pm
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

This is cute, kind of childish :)

on Dec. 8 2011 at 6:08 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks :) that means a lot

BeingAnna GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 5:23 pm
BeingAnna GOLD, Montreal, Other
13 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty
-Marilyn Monroe

Beautiful! Please keep writting, your style is amazing :)

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:45 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thanks i will

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:24 pm
Lovestinks1395 GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
God save us everyone we will burn inside thefire of a thousand suns.

beautiful, keep writing. Keep me posted when you have new work posted!