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The Sound of My Heart

December 1, 2011
By ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

I used to wonder
If you could hear the sound
of my heart pounding
I stopped worrying
I didn’t like you

I started wondering
if you could hear it
but breaking instead

How it happened
that we stopped being friends
I wish it didn’t happen
I miss you
as a friend
Don’t you hear it?
That’s the sound
of my heart

The author's comments:
I wrote this the same day I’m submitting it and I don’t think it’s any good. But it’s about me and this guy who used to be my friend until I admitted I liked him.... But if you like someone and you think/know they like you back, you should tell them!

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 10:10 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow! Amazing! Great job! Please return the favor and look at my work :) It would mean a lot