Remembering | Teen Ink


January 31, 2012
By kaylala_22 PLATINUM, Hillsboro, Missouri
kaylala_22 PLATINUM, Hillsboro, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"A beautiful personality shines brighter than any pretty face"

It's all coming back to me
Swirling and twirling
Falling down on one knee
A question you should not have been asking

I turned around
Wiped the blur out of my eyes
Along with your question still shamelessly on the ground
A smack to the cheek and then your false cries

Tears burning my face
On the way to chase
Your horrible disgrace
Away from the place

I hate that I love you
I love that I hate you

Baseball is a sport that many play
Not a way to keep track of what you take away

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on Feb. 21 2012 at 2:41 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

That first stanza flows perfectly. I've been reading through a number of your poems. You've got something here. I love stumbling upon talent. You incorporated rhymes nicely.