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What a Wonderful Day

February 12, 2012
By austenite77 GOLD, Appleton, Wisconsin
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My darling my dear what a wonderful day!
The wind’s blowing fierce ‘cross the town

Have you ever seen a sky that’s so perfectly gray?
Or wondered if clouds would ever break

The snow comes in spirals from every which way
Immersing the world in chilling sheets

With a day so great there’s only one thing to say:
Will the temperature ever reach twenty?

© Ashley K., Harvey, ND

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maizyiscrazy GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 6:15 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

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I think that this is just great! I love the way that you point out the simple joy in snow! My one suggestion is that maybe you could change the last line just a little bit... I don't know, but I really like your poem! It would be great if you could read/give feedback on my poem "Perfectly Damaged." Thank you!
Aginger GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 10:25 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
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I absolutely love this poem!!!! It is so simple and dreamy. Life is about enjoying the small things, and just being quite simply happy, and you portray that well. Nice job! I would really appreciate it if you could read my poem "Forever"