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Their Love

February 11, 2012
By theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
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Their love hovered about them
like a moat of dust
suspended in the sunshine

When apart it lay dormant
like a coat of snow
sprinkled on the forest pine

When together it whirred round
like charged particles
sparking interest at random

It congealed inside them
like an enlarged heart
beating something like freedom

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on Apr. 12 2012 at 11:44 am
DarkPanther BRONZE, Belding, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I dont want to be another statistic"// "Nothing is real until its gone"~Goo Goo Dolls~// "To dream a dream, is to imagine a world of possibilities" ~ Me~// "Stab my back, its better when i bleed for you" All American Rejects

this is a great poem, i love the imagery