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February 17, 2012
By CeCelia32 BRONZE, New York City, New York
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CeCelia32 BRONZE, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nobody had the heart to tell Steve the truth.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - The Bee Thing :)

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Venomous words they'll spout and spew,
Never with a thought to you.
Your heart is broken,
but tears don't come.
He broke your heart, without a backward glance,
at what he left behind,
here in the past.
He broke your heart,
and nearly shattered your soul
And it took such a great toll,
on me, my heart
the only things left.
You try to move on
but never seem better
because,
you are shattered.

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rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER said...
on Dec. 8 2012 at 7:51 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

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excellent word choice, if definately hooked me in the begining but lost me along the way. i suggest ending with more powerful thought, or idea
AlaskaGirl GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 5:43 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
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&quot;Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day&quot;

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I agree with I am. It is amazing. You are an awsome poet
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 5:31 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Interesting, your rhyme has a lot of promise and your flow is quite good, though I think it could use a little more imagery and personality. Keep writing, you've got potential :)