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R.M.S.Titanic

February 26, 2012
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


R.M.S.Titanic...
They called it the Ship of Dreams,
it sailed along like a tranquil reverie.
Some said it'll reach the States, some questioned it's destiny.
The dreaded night arrived at last. A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it from the inside out, destroyed every single thing, sparing just a handful.
The mighty ship cleaved into half, plunging everything into the cold darkness of the infinite waters, plunging dreams, hopes, lives and love.
Titanic, a prisoner of fate, now lies underneath the Great Ocean, tranquil as when it first set sail, immortalizing a beautiful dream turned into a terrible nightmare...



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on Mar. 30 2012 at 6:34 am
Midnight_Starsong GOLD, Wesson, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
She never once gave up. My mom is my hero.

I love this keep writing

on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:22 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

It was a very tragic incident.. So many lives lost... Thanks for reading :)

on Mar. 26 2012 at 5:56 am
lil-lord BRONZE, Alberton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
be what you want to be or you're nothing

wow this is gud :'( got me crying

on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:18 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks :) 

KateLA GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 10:23 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

I really liked this, 5/5! Would you just read two pages in my horror story called, 'If I kissed you' ? It's a strange name but it makes sense in the end.

on Mar. 21 2012 at 4:56 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :)

Ca-sassy said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 6:29 pm
Great job!!(: I really liked the beginning and end, but in the middle you had some pretty good descriptive words.  The titanic is a neat topic because that story is just sooo sad!  But you portrayed it well and I think you're pretty dang good at this type of writing!  Oooh and thanks for the suggestions and everything on my paper((; haha

on Mar. 16 2012 at 8:02 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks a lot :)

on Mar. 16 2012 at 8:01 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :)

Becca17 GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 7:52 am
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Seven Deadly Sins:
Wealth without work
Pleasure without conscience
Science without humanity
Knowledge without character
Politics without principle
Commerce without morality
Worship without sacrifice.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

fantastic imagery. "prisoner of fate" great word choice. 5/5

on Mar. 16 2012 at 7:25 am
Hetalia-otaku SILVER, Sweden, Maine
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Great poem!  I'm glad I was on chat when you posted this :)

on Mar. 15 2012 at 1:33 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks :) :)

on Mar. 15 2012 at 12:51 am
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
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Very well written! You used perfect word choice so that I can picture the fatal scene in my mind! 5 stars :)

on Mar. 14 2012 at 5:07 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you:)

on Mar. 13 2012 at 4:07 pm
FaultyStars SILVER, Ottawa, Other
6 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." - Maya Angelou

Great word choice and excellent flow. :)

on Mar. 13 2012 at 1:51 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :)

on Mar. 12 2012 at 8:37 am
albealer SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is Limited. Imagination encircles the world."~Albert Einstein

Awesome poem Sapphire! :P

on Mar. 12 2012 at 7:08 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :)

on Mar. 12 2012 at 6:19 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

It's very constructive. and I loved it!

on Mar. 10 2012 at 6:09 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks :) ya sure I'll check out your work too :)