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R.M.S.Titanic

February 26, 2012
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


R.M.S.Titanic...
They called it the Ship of Dreams,
it sailed along like a tranquil reverie.
Some said it'll reach the States, some questioned it's destiny.
The dreaded night arrived at last. A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it from the inside out, destroyed every single thing, sparing just a handful.
The mighty ship cleaved into half, plunging everything into the cold darkness of the infinite waters, plunging dreams, hopes, lives and love.
Titanic, a prisoner of fate, now lies underneath the Great Ocean, tranquil as when it first set sail, immortalizing a beautiful dream turned into a terrible nightmare...



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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 9:26 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Really great!! I love your choice of words and the way you describe things. It gives the reader a good mental picture. I really like the story of the titanic and this was a great way of retelling the story!!

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on Mar. 10 2012 at 7:15 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks a lot :) :) I'm really really obsessed with Titanic LoL my friends keep teasing me :P

on Mar. 10 2012 at 7:13 am
TheKayster BRONZE, Falmouth, Maine
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You miss 100% of the shots you don't take"

All i can say is WOW! This is AMAZING! I really LOVE your word choice! I think the word choice makes this poem really stick out from all the rest! Keep writing! I think I'll subscribe to you!! definatley  a 10/5 poem :D

on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:05 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanx a lot :)

 


sonJaNae said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:13 pm
sonJaNae, Fort Wainwright, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can change a person, but someone can be a person's reason to change" -Spongebob Squarepants

This is nice! I like the last lines!