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life or death

March 19, 2012
By xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."


Death calls for me
Life threatens me
So hard to live
Too easy to die
Wanna choose both
Can’t ever decide
Don’t want to face problems
Don’t want to see darkness
Which do I choose?
Death peace though dark
Life is bright but hard
The decision needs to be made
But all I want is freedom



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on May. 3 2012 at 2:14 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

thx rite now i dont feel like this anymore bc of my bf he reallymakes me feel gud about life and we dont do anything but i'll always keep on mind what u say. and i am sory about ur friend.

on May. 1 2012 at 11:11 pm
readingmusic BRONZE, Arp, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet..." -William Shakespeare "Romeo and Juliet"

There is always something more to live for...my friend committed suicide and I wish he realized just how many people loved cared and looked up to him no matter what your hardships you will always have someone that cares so please don't leave them behind

on Apr. 25 2012 at 3:08 pm
firewithdoves GOLD, HARTFIELD, Virginia
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Your poems are always something I really really connect with, and this one even more so. I feel this way so much. 

on Apr. 17 2012 at 9:32 am
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

thx music lover and beautifulspirit. I guess it would be a suicide piece. It's just how i feel and all i really want is freedom whether it be living or dying. and it probaly is dying, becuz this world doesnt really have anyhting to offer.

on Apr. 14 2012 at 1:44 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I like how your poem begins---the first four lines made me pay attention. I liked it---you've compared and contrasted what life and death bring to a person. Is there a suicide theme to your piece?

music9lover7 said...
on Apr. 9 2012 at 3:29 pm
music9lover7, Henderson, Texas
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this is awsome ur amazeing at writing poems