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Killing Innocence

March 23, 2012
By Privyet BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
Privyet BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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Killing Innocence

Killed someone once,
Her name was innocence.

It was a hot steamy day.
There was no one around.
White smoke arose,
From the ground.

Innocence struggled the whole way;
Coughing and wheezing from the pain.

It was dry.
Had and itchy throat.
The sun did shine…
As I left a note.

She got in my way. She hindered me.
I didn’t need her; simple as that.

Happy it’s done.
The mind is numb.
I’m having fun.
My eyes are dumb.

The day is done.
Innocence is dead.
The day is done.
I don’t care.

The author's comments:
A poem I did in creative writing class :p

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on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:05 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

sorry my computer hates me sometimes

on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:05 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

I loved this. Keep writing your work is awesome. if u could check out some of my work that would be awesome.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:05 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

I loved this. Keep writing your work is awesome. if u could check out some of my work that would be awesome.