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I walk alone

April 26, 2012
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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Black as night
Red as blood
Looking towards heavens light
Drowning in the red flood
Walking on earths bones
Devastating the old ways
I must walk alone
There is nothing you can say


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on May. 3 2013 at 12:48 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

The possessive forms need apostrophes. Other than that I've liked this one. It's a cool picture.