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Serenity and You

May 12, 2012
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

When you are in the storm of trouble...

Feel your heart
If it feels right,
Take the sword and fight it!
Let the wounds bleed and be revived
However...if it feels otherwise,
Fight it with the sword of serenity,
Soon follows the veracity!

at either times,
you are truly yourself when you are serene,
Do you realize that?
Give it a try, see the CHANGE, the REAL YOU.
Therefore, feel your heart in a state of serenity.
Even so, not in a tempestuous state,
For sure it will bring you down into ashes.

Fine! if you lose yourself to rage,
Baby, there’s always a second chance.
Just realize yourself to yourself.
Don’t repeat the mistake.

Its ok if you fall,
For you will rise!
Just don’t fall in the same line yet again.

Being yourself baby, sometimes requires restitution
do so and make yourself over.
Be yourself baby for you are made awesome!

The author's comments:
I figured that i think and behave distinctly when i am in a rage and when i am serene, with the results being neat when i am serene.Dont you feel the same?

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This article has 43 comments.

on May. 23 2012 at 10:50 am
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.
For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.
And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
-Audrey Hepburn

This is awesome! keep it up! :)

on May. 23 2012 at 10:13 am
Briannah SILVER, Whitehall, New York
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some call me fearless. I really just ignore the fear.

This poem's cool too, compassion, good job.

on May. 23 2012 at 8:15 am
MkArgetlam SILVER, I Dont Kno, Other
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Listen to your Heart..coz its the key for the treasure..
Treasure of Life..



Loved it! ^__^

on May. 23 2012 at 7:50 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
14 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is the air we breathe." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Being sad is a waste of time." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Girls should never be afraid to be smart." - Emma Watson

Really beuatifully written! Loved it!!

on May. 20 2012 at 11:53 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
4 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay Strong! <3

 So Touching...Serentiy is such a beautiful word . Beautiful written!

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on May. 20 2012 at 11:46 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments

I was enjoying the poem a lot up until you started chucking in "Baby"...

You had a great selection of words, a clear message and voice, and then you completely changed up the style and threw me for a loop.

Other than the extreme change in wording, I like the poem. I like the message especially!

on May. 20 2012 at 11:43 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
4 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay Strong! <3

Beautiful written...such a pretty word - Serenity :)

on May. 20 2012 at 12:19 pm
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
8 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Wow! The language is a mixture of contemporary and medieval! That makes it so different. And I love the concept in the first stanza. To fight with serenity. Lovely. :)

on May. 19 2012 at 11:48 am
Aeliss-Novak-the-Zombie-Space-Pirate BRONZE, That Place With All The Trees And Stuff, Oregon
1 article 3 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, just a reason not to try.~Kutless

I'm going to smile and make you think I'm happy, I'm going to laugh, so you don't see me cry, I'm going to let you go in style, and even if it kills me - I'm going to smile.~Anonymous

The language gets confusing sometimes, but once I got that hang of it I loved it. Though, I am not myself when I'm serene. :)

on May. 19 2012 at 10:54 am
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

thank you.... its going in my favorites.... and copied to a list i have to read again... it's great inspiration... :)

on May. 19 2012 at 10:11 am
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

this is what i have been needing to hear and no one has told me i love it good on everything i love it

Shivam GOLD said...
on May. 19 2012 at 9:49 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

"Be yourself baby for you are made awesome!" is no doubt an awesome line to finish.....

also i liked this one "Soon follows the veracity...."

the whole poem is very thoughtfully written.... with an inspiring message... keep writing. we need this kind of stuff...'

Saphy said...
on May. 19 2012 at 9:45 am
Saphy, Hollywood, California
0 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never forget to smile.

I loved your vocabluary, but try to expand it even more. For example, maybe substitute awesome for another word. Also, I was a bit confused at some parts. But, overall, good message!

on May. 17 2012 at 9:11 am
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
i liked it it was nice

on May. 17 2012 at 8:59 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really like this, but I got a little counfused at some parts... It's still really good though, I love it :)

on May. 16 2012 at 10:03 am
mindless_dreaming BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May make my heart as a millstone, set my face as a flint, Cheat and be cheated, and die: who knows? We are ashes and we are dust." -Alfred, Lord Tennyson, 'Maud'

Such a good poem, I love this !!!!! :)

EpicOwl GOLD said...
on May. 16 2012 at 7:11 am
EpicOwl GOLD, Macedon, Other
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing can come of nothing ~ Shakespeare

So good! Brilliant job

on May. 16 2012 at 7:00 am
PinkiePie123 GOLD, Bellevue, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i love you poem it is so good write more

on May. 16 2012 at 7:00 am
babygirl102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
when i ran all i wanted was for you to come after me

i love it   its nice <3


on May. 16 2012 at 6:51 am
PinkiePie123 GOLD, Bellevue, Ohio
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments
if someone is out there pick on a little kid help them out if you are scared get a teacher help they out