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CHOCOLATE

October 1, 2012
By Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."


A sweet delicacy
Designed with great accuracy,
It’s efficacy to give ecstasy
Is filled in every inch of its intricacy.
Its deep brown hue,
Makes us go through a feeling that’s new.
The feeling that meets us very few.
It lights up a grey life with a smile,
Brings about exuberance for awhile.
You wish for it to never cease,
So that it may forever appease
Your palate, your senses.
You spot it, you pounce for it,
After all, what is food in its comparison?
Just a lump of nutrients, that too insipid.
You blend in with its intense nature,
You get lost in its depth.
So strong is its attraction,
So full is the satisfaction,
It gives,
One lives.
I write this down as I wait,
For it to arrive: my irresistible chocolate!


The author's comments:
Everytime i read this poem, i need to sush to the shop to buy myself a chocolate! M luvin' it! ;)

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on Jun. 7 2013 at 11:21 pm
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

awww....thank you !!! Obviously, WHO DOESN'T?! ;)

on Jun. 7 2013 at 11:41 am
coco7misty SILVER, Acton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't take the sky from me." - Joss Whedom, "Ballad of Serenity"

beautiful. because who doesn't love chocolate?  

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 7:28 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.<br /> - Zoya Khan

I LOVE CHOCOLATE...!!! Very different poem :)

hypermagical said...
on Nov. 2 2012 at 5:36 pm
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

After reading this, I need to go get me some chocolate!  Very good description, you place the reader in a psychological trance.

on Oct. 7 2012 at 6:07 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them.&quot;

thank u! lol :D

on Oct. 7 2012 at 6:06 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them.&quot;

aww thanks compassion! i  luv cadbury crackle!! i'll make it sure dat wen i go i'll get one fr ya too! :)

on Oct. 5 2012 at 7:13 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Now, what do i always think of you?  I think of you as a maven. You can be a maven at which ever you wish to be. Not every ones like that you see. Reading this poem i feel you are a maven at expressing senses with such fluency! Love the rhyming,the word choice. The way you limned the feel of it (the chocolate) is undeniably justified. Now can i have  a cadbury crackle? ;)

on Oct. 5 2012 at 6:57 am
Fallen_angel963 BRONZE, Lakewood, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;haters gonna hate but sooner or later they are going to appreciate&quot;

great write.. now i want chocolate thou! C: