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Fly on the Wall

November 27, 2012
By so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."


A blur of colors—
A sickening yellow,
A rotten green,
A sinister red
Blending like paint dripping down a canvas.
I hear a voice,
High-pitched,
Interrupted by an outburst of giggles.
Red and white swim together in varsity jackets,
Poland Springs bottles crushed and left on the floor.
I rub my wings together,
And sigh that I can’t see detail.
Plaid and blue intertwine,
Textbooks out
Glasses perched on noses
Like birds on branches.
Black continues on to more black
Squatting on the floor
Whispering into each other’s ears.
A human comes towards me,
And I quickly move to a different place
Along the cold brick wall.
Laughing echoes in my ears,
A hollow sound,
Like knocking on wood.
Mocking voices yell over the noise,
Insulting those lower than themselves.
Mac n’ Cheese squashed on the floor,
Scattered crumbled notes
Under the round tables.
The bell rings,
Everyone runs to the lockers.
I prepare for flight,
And wished that for once
I wasn’t a fly on the wall.


The author's comments:
This piece was written straight from my heart, with the help of idioms. The character is based off somene I know very well, and it hurts to see her as just a fly on the wall.

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on Jan. 8 2013 at 11:31 am
lovely34 BRONZE, Minneapolis, Kansas
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This is a wonderful poem! Great job!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 11:30 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you! And it was :)

Setizia GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 6:33 pm
Setizia GOLD, Darnestown, Maryland
13 articles 5 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
The purpose of life is to search eternally for the purpose of life

I'm not sure if this was on purpose, but the rate and clarity at which imagery is presented: flashed and clearly displayed and quickly replaced by the next line really reminds me of how flies dart around extremely quickly. Anyways, it creates a cool effect!

on Dec. 21 2012 at 9:57 am
chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hebrews13:10

the fact that the world is made of the most intricate wonder is not at all a wall that would prevent us from truth and this is simply exactly what we all ae to say to ourselves  

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2012 at 9:53 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2012 at 9:53 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Dec. 19 2012 at 5:25 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

Good poem. I enjoyed reading it, I gave it 5 out 5...

on Dec. 13 2012 at 5:14 pm
ProcrastinatingSlams SILVER, Daphne, Alabama
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Very interesting. 4 out of 5

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2012 at 9:25 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Dec. 12 2012 at 1:52 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

real emotion. and it rang very tru for me! nice job!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 10:45 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you!

on Dec. 11 2012 at 6:07 pm
amelia.estaire SILVER, Osceola, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I take real people and put them in extraordinary situations." - Robert Cormier

it was really good! it portrayed a lot of emotion, too. :)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2012 at 9:56 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thanks! :)

on Dec. 7 2012 at 9:39 pm
AlexanderQ GOLD, Oak Creek, Colorado
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments
It was a little hard to follow, but after reading the author's comments I understood and really liked it. :)