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I Don't Believe You

January 30, 2013
By Marissax3 PLATINUM, Bakersfield, California
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Validate my existence,

Please.

Staring back isn’t enough.

Say my name,

Pinch my nose,

See my thoughts,

And read my words.

© Jessica F., Bradford, MA

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emmaRi0 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 9:30 pm
emmaRi0 SILVER, Middleton, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"No guts, no glory"

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I love the emotion in it, it's a simple poem but expresses such great feeling. Breathtaking if you've been there.
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 9:27 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss

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I like it nice. I understand your feelings
Beef. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 12:18 am
Beef. PLATINUM, Kenmore, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Does my sexiness upset you? <br /> Does it come as a surprise <br /> That I dance like I&#039;ve got diamonds <br /> At the meeting of my thighs? <br /> - Maya Angelou, Still I Rise<br /> <br /> Nothing ends<br /> Nothing ever ends<br /> - Dr. Manhattan, Watchmen

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I dig the simplicity of this.