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February 9, 2013
By SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

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Oh, there you came after all,
bringing joy like a ford
healing our wounds oh wounds,
ending misery of the bright lord.

Oh, there you came after all
fulfilling the villagers' prayer
earning them pounds, oh pounds
such a smile is so rare.

Oh there you came after all
arousing spirit of a teen in a poet
words see no bounds oh bounds
blessing for all, for the small and the tall
aroma on the lover's serenade.

© Chelsea C., Auburndale, FL

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The First rain of the season comes, and comes like an angel sent for welfare of all.........
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SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2013 at 8:35 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

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Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

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Thanks dude.........
SLim_SHaDy SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2013 at 8:34 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

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Thanks man......... !!!!!
ZainabS SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 7:12 am
ZainabS SILVER, Karachi, Other
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Thats really expressive and deep, great work man.
monkeyluvs2write GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 4:28 pm
monkeyluvs2write GOLD, Falls Church, Virginia
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&ldquo;What man calls civilization always results in deserts. Man is never on the square &ndash; he uses up the fat and greenery of the earth. Each generation wastes a little more of the future with greed and lust for riches.&rdquo; -- Don Marquis

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Wow, this poem reminds of a poem I wrote called Raining Beauty.  I love your poem and I think that the repetition of the first line had a really strong impact on the poem and on the reader.