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April 14, 2013
By MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right&quot;<br /> I also have another &quot;Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts&quot;

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It only reflects the bad.
And never shows the good.
Only shows my weakness.
But never wants to share the strengths.
Always wanted me to lose what I have.
And gain what I don’t.
Telling me I need to change.
Showing me all that I need to change.
Never being the good friend in telling me I’m beautiful.
Never saying you don’t need to change.
Never giving the satisfaction to people to know they’re beautiful.

© Heather W., No., Brunswick, NJ

The author's comments:
So many people become a victim of thinking that they are fat and not beautiful. I was one, but I have been getting over it. This poem was to tell people that they are beautiful no matter what. Always have confidence and don't let anyone tell you differently.
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artist-today SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2013 at 11:59 pm
artist-today SILVER, Alberta, Other
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&quot;Don&#039;t argue with an idiot they will bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.&quot;<br /> -Mark Twain

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It was good, had a good voice and meaning. I like how you spoke to the person. I think it was missing something though, I'm not sure exactly but I felt as if there could have been more, like more stuff you could have said.