numbness | Teen Ink


May 10, 2013
By paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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make everything you do
a science experiment
and watch your feelings fade,
your curiosity stumble-
what a lovely thing it is
to feel nothing at all
nothing for you

empty, empty, empty

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on May. 20 2013 at 8:53 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

It catches the essences of the point you seem to drive home, very well! No suggestions, great flow, great word choice, simply amazing!